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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6300
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients' health, even their life. Seeing this situation. I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead to face your problem, which helps to solve it. And the last, honest surely helps to make the society more harmony. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.

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