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Different people have different views on negative effect of human activities to our earth. Some people think human activities do too much side effect thing to the earth such as rusbish pollution,fell trees ,broken the forest and so on. Other people think we could do something to change this situation that human activities affect the plant . As to my personal , i think we could action now to improve this situation. For exaplme , we ride the bicycle ranther than drive car as possible as we can, recyle the water for washing clothes or cleaning. Our plant will be better and better as for we do something good to it .
