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Dear David : I’m WangMing . I am very happy to heart that you will come to Biejing to learning English .Of course ,it is not easy to learn .But you should believe yourself .Here some views for you First of all ,you must have a dictionary about chinese .It will help you to look up when you need .Second , if you can keep dirary in chinese every week ,you must make a great progress .Third,try your best to talk with someone aroud with you ,if you do like that ,your chinese will obtain progress in learning chinese. All in all ,don't compare with others ,just find the most suitable ways for yourself .Remenber : hardly, don't give up ,believe yourself . It's my pleasure to meet you ,if you have difficult that you can call me any time .
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