2012年专四作文真题:端午节

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Tomorrow is the Dragon Boat Festival which is the traditional festival in China.There is a old story about the origin of the Dragon Festivel.In Chunqiu period,there is a famous person named Quyuan.He is a loving-country person.In order to prevent the country Chu,he jumped into the river.people around the river all put zongzi and rice ,etc into the rive to raise fish to protect the body of Quyuan.From thay time , ,Chinese people celebriate this festival by wrapping zongzi and boating on the river to memery Quyuan. In my hometown ,the elders always wrap zongzi and the children wear the coulorful silk rings.And in Guangdong province,people usually boating on the river. Almost every Chinses people knows this important festival.And they spend the Dragon Boat Festival every year.