2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题。

Living in an age when people all are eager to success, we can never figure out the fact that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket, which want to reveal that we have more than one choice to succeed so don't put all your mind, energy on one thing. The reason why I insist on my viewpoint that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket mainly lie in the following aspects. To begin with, if you put all your money, thought, energy on business in which you are engaged you may destroy by failure and lost all your own. In addition,