单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. His name is Tom. He has long hair and black eyes. He is tall.he comes from China.that is a nice city.I go to work with him every day.I am very happy with him.he is a good man .one day I went to his home ,I looked at him in the bedroom.