小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

I have a good friend. His name is Tom. He has long hair and black eyes. He is tall. He comes from China. That is a nice city.I go to work with him every day. I am very happy with him.He is a good man . One day I went to his home ,I looked at him in the bedroom.