作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;使用了个别复杂句,但文中错误句子较多。
2001,3,7day,today is first we not eat together to dinner.I'm12year old. 2007,4,6day,my prance was more and more busy,we together eating dinner has more little time.everyday i just last one go home and last one eating and just one say goodness.No one with me to say good dream .I'm fell the poor.But i never with to my prance say that opinion. because they must to be say i'm a adult.every one told about is failed final over.