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文中高级词汇表达比较恰当，但存在拼写错误；文章层次较为清晰；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。
In this world of change and complexity,student's mental health is the most critical requirement in campus.We exist in a dynamic world we may face various psychological problems,such as stress,anxiety,solitude and so on.This topic has constantly captured the wide attention,sparking the heated discussion,ocuppying the headline newspaper. From my personal pespective,it is imperative for our school to take some mesures to deal with this problem.For one thing,we should apple to our schools to pay more attention to student's mentality and cultivate the awreness of school that mental health is of great significance to their growth.For another, our school should arrange recreation activities that add color to the dull routine daliy life. At the same time,our student should also attach more importance on their psycology.To be specific,students need to share their emotions with intimate friends in spare time.Only in this way can they allievate the metal promble.Also I belive we student can surmoun all the problems and have a brilliant future.
