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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;从句使用量稍显不足;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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The Prejudice of Apperance Here is a saying:" don't judge man by his apperance, so as measure ocean by liter". I can't agree it more. We often judge people by their looking first. Beauty will gain more notice and yet the ugly will be ignored and luaghed. It is unfair to one who is without good-looking but talent. Unly betty, a TV show's actress, who is a ugly girl but with intellence, is successful in her career at last. This is a story about a ugly girl reached to her dream through her industry. Martin Luter Kim had said that " I have a dream that one day my four little children will not be judge by the color of their skin but by their character". That revealed that we should not judge people by their apperance. In conclusion, we should judge people by their behavior and action rather than their looking.

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