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As the Chinese saying goes: "It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." As for me, life is a journey to experience to learn and to enjoy. That’s the reason why I enjoy travelling. As far as I am concerned, travelling not only broadens my horizons, but also opens my eyes to the world. There is no doubt that culture demand is the motivation for travel, which is actually the enjoyment and experience of culture. Travel is a kind of material demand, but in essence it is the spiritual and cultural demand. As people visit historical sites, get to know the local conditions and customs, see famous mountains and largest rivers on travels, they are feeling the culture pulse, perceiving the cultural charm and absorbing the culture nourishment. What’s more, tourism, in terms of its objective purposes, has a social function which contributes to human communication. We can make different kinds of friends from home and abroad during the journey. It's a human nature that people who come from the dame nature just fall in love into the same. Last but not least, according to surveys conducted by tourism institutions, people are so fond of travelling that tourism has become one of the faster growing industries in most countries. To sum up, travel, as a comprehensive and high-class cultural activity, bears self-explicit cultural significance. Only when we know the meaning of traveling can we enjoy traveling. Time is limited, but the interest of travelling is limitless.