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2001年专四作文真题:Travel broadens the mind

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:18浏览次数:5957
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Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come toknow the significance of travel through our own experience.
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Travel Broadens the Mind
You are to write in threeparts: 
In the first part, state clearlywhat your view is.
In the second part, support yourview with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what youhave written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded forcontent, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow theinstructions may result in a loss of marks.
用户的作文(系统评分89.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

As the Chinese saying goes: "It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." As for me, life is a journey to experience to learn and to enjoy. That’s the reason why I enjoy travelling. As far as I am concerned, travelling not only broadens my horizons, but also opens my eyes to the world. There is no doubt that culture demand is the motivation for travel, which is actually the enjoyment and experience of culture. Travel is a kind of material demand, but in essence it is the spiritual and cultural demand. As people visit historical sites, get to know the local conditions and customs, see famous mountains and largest rivers on travels, they are feeling the culture pulse, perceiving the cultural charm and absorbing the culture nourishment. What’s more, tourism, in terms of its objective purposes, has a social function which contributes to human communication. We can make different kinds of friends from home and abroad during the journey. It's a human nature that people who come from the dame nature just fall in love into the same. Last but not least, according to surveys conducted by tourism institutions, people are so fond of travelling that tourism has become one of the faster growing industries in most countries. To sum up, travel, as a comprehensive and high-class cultural activity, bears self-explicit cultural significance. Only when we know the meaning of traveling can we enjoy traveling. Time is limited, but the interest of travelling is limitless.

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