作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Hello,John.Thank you for your inventing.I would like to your home at the time.I want to have diner with you.We can play cards and chat with each other,that we have good time.What a pity!I was busy to preparing an important exam the day to day .I'm so sorry about this.we should select anther date .i hope you have a funny day,see you then.