作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;使用了简单的从句;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear,John. Thank you for your inventing. I would like to your home at the time.I want to have diner with you.We can play cards and chat with each other,that we have a good time.What a pity!I was busy to preparing an important exam the day to day .I'm so sorry about this.we should select anther date .i hope you have fun,see you then.