作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Dear,John. Thank you for your inventing. I would like to your home at the time.I want to have diner with you.We can play cards and chat with each other,that we have a good time.What a pity!I am busy to preparing an important exam the day to day .I'm so sorry about this.We should select anther date .I hope you have fun,see you then.