加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用高级词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear,John. Thank you for your inventing. I would like to your home at the time.I want to have diner with you.We can play cards and chat with each other,that we have a good time.What a pity!I was busy preparing an important exam the day to day .I'm so sorry about this.We should select anther date .I hope you have fun,see you then.