山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Dear，John. Thank you for your inventing. I would like to your home at the time.I want to have diner with you.We can play cards and chat with each other,that we have a good time.What a pity!I was busy preparing an important exam the day to day .I'm so sorry about this.We should select another date.I hope you have fun,see you then.