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Notice To improve the students'ability and enrich the campus life,the Postgraduates'Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization. The basic qualifications for applicants are as follows.To begin with,applicants'educational background should be in line with this occasion.In addition,they must have a strong professional spirit and cheerful personality as well as primarily should be aged under 35.Lastly,the students with relevant working experience shall be preferred. Those who are keen on this activity may sign up with their monitors before the next weekend.Everyboday is welcome to join it. Postgraduates'Association
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