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From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, we received 3,000 piece of goods on 22 Dec, but according to our order of No. 35 that the quantity should be 3,500 piece, and we have not received them yet. Please check your packing list and looking forward to your early reply! Yours faithfully, Wang Hai yang
