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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9560
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

shopping on internet is a tread. There are many advantages in online shopping which you don't need go out for saving much time, you just need a computer or mobile to search what you like and purchase, the process of pay money is very convenient, the commodities you bought can be delivered to your department directly. However, we may encounter different problem with online shopping, for example, the size and quality of the goods received may not fit to your expectation, the products may be damaged and you have to dispute with the suppliers. Moreover, you may revel in online shopping to waste much time or buy some unnecessary things. For my perspective, you have to clearly and exactly know the terms of shopping with the seller on internet and find some prestige supplier for after sales. At last, you should buy anything by think twice.

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