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shopping on internet is a tread. There are many advantages in online shopping which you don't need go out for saving much time, you just need a computer or mobile to search what you like and purchase, the process of pay money is very convenient, the commodities you bought can be delivered to your department directly. However, we may encounter different problem with online shopping, for example, the size and quality of the goods received may not fit to your expectation, the products may be damaged and you have to dispute with the suppliers. Moreover, you may revel in online shopping to waste much time or buy some unnecessary things. For my perspective, you have to clearly and exactly know the terms of shopping with the seller on internet and find some prestige supplier for after sales. At last, you should buy anything by think twice.