衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强高级词汇的使用。
Now,many students lost theirconfident in study English,so their choose give it up.But study English today is very necessary,because they can help us when we are abroad one day,if you want to improve you English mark,you should keep three advice.First,you should speak English everyday by yourself or your classmates.Second,you should develop a good habit in write notes.Third,you finish your homework carefully. If you do this,believe me,your mark wii improve quickest.