衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
Now,many students lost their confident in study English,so their give it up.But study English in today is very necessary,because they can help us when we are abroad one day,if you want to improve you English mark,you should keep three advice.First,you should speak English everyday by yourself or your classmates.Second,you should develop a good habit in write notes.Third,you finish your homework carefully. If you do this,believe me,your mark wii improve quickest.