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We are acknowledged how precious our life are. However there are least and least people would scedule their life at present. They realized the meaningful life merely regardless of the way to create a meaningful life for themselves. In my opinon, we should not just realize the cherish life, we should also make a plan for it ,which can increase the colorful and meaningful part for our life. For example, if you want to be a ordinary person, you can try your best to help the person neaby. As the pervob says giving is receiving,we can gain something
