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文中衔接词丰富；能够使用一些不错的从句；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
We are all know how precious our life are. However there are least and least people would scedule their life at present. They realized the meaningful life merely regardless of the way to create a meaningful life for themselves. In my opinon, we should not just realize the cherish life, we should also make a plan for it ,which can increase the colorful and meaningful part for our life. For example, if you want to be an ordinary person, you can try your best to help the person neaby. As the pervob says giving is receiving,we can gain something
