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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；全文结构较为严谨；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
We are acknowledged our precious life. However there are least and least people scedule their life at present. They realized the meaningful life merely regardless of the way to create a meaningful life for themselves. In my opinon, we should not just realize the cherish life, we should also make a plan for it ,which can increase the colorful and meaningful part for our life. For example, if you want to be an ordinary person, you can try your best to help the person neaby. As the pervob says giving is receiving,we can gain something
