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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；全文结构较为严谨。
We are acknowledged our precious life. However there are least and least people scedule their life at present. They realized the meaningful life merely regardless of the way to create a meaningful life for themselves. In my opinon, we should not just realize cherish life, we should also make a plan for it ,which can increase the colorful and meaningful part for our life. For example, if you want to be an ordinary person, you can try your best to help the person nearby. As the proverb says giving is receiving,we can gain something
