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文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章层次较为清晰；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
We are acknowledged our precious life. There are a few people sceduled their life at present. They realized the meaningful life merely regardless of the way to create a meaningful life for themselves. In my opinon, we should not just realize cherish life, we should also make a plan for it ,which can increase the colorful and meaningful part for our life. For example, if you want to be an ordinary person, you can try your best to help the person nearby. As the proverb says giving is receiving,we can gain something
