可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;全文结构较为严谨。
We are acknowledged our precious life. There are a few people making plan for their life at present. They realized the meaningful life merely regardless of the way to create a meaningful life for themselves. In my opinion, we should not just cherish our life, we should also make a plan for it, which can increase the colorful and meaningful part for our life. For example, if you want to be an ordinary person, you can try your best to help the person nearby. As the proverb says “giving is receiving”, we can gain some intangible