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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9023
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

We are acknowledged our precious life. There are a few people making plan for their life at present. They realized the meaningful life merely regardless of the way to create a meaningful life for themselves. In my opinion, we should not just cherish our life, we should also make a plan for it, which can increase the colorful and meaningful part for our life. For example, if you want to be an ordinary person, you can try your best to help the person nearby. As the proverb says giving is receiving, we can gain some intangible things.If you want to well known by others, you may enhance your knowledge and create more senseful things for people.

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