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How to Live a Low-carbon Life As the contemporary society develops dramatically,there has existed a discussion of how to live a low-carbon life that has arouse individuals great concern.If you went into a supermarket, you will see a heap of commercials which were branded by the label of low-carbon, such as green ,environment friendly, zero-release and so forth.A sea of account for this trend, yet I will review the most significant. Low-carbon life is beneficial for our daily life, which is resource-saved, money-economized and advantageous for our fitness.All of this factors lead to the fact that the life style of low-carbon has become an indispensable part in our daily life, as time goes by it will show more profound significant, in the long term low-carbon life will facilitate establish a beautiful environment. Ultimately,just as a proverb saying:life is not merely living but living in healthy.So we have adequate reasons to believe that only when we live in a low-carbon, green way can we hope to enjoy a more comfortable and convenient life.