2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

my hometown is a quit place ,there have a river and server mountian .I want take her go to the mountian top,make her look sunlight ,because it very beautiful,her glad,of cause,her name is zhangjing,is my favorite girl of english ,and I'd like bring her go to school of mother,because there have a tree, the tree is very long time,compeny my ten year,