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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3579
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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可适当增加从句的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少。

用户练习作文:

In the USA, 33% of teenagers would like to order hamburgers while teenagers' second choice is pizza taking up 26%. Later, it is French Fries which 22% of teenagers prefer to taste in terms of fast food. Apart from hamburger, pizza and French Fries, there are also other three kinds of fast food part of teenagers would choose. They are Fried Chicken Tacos and Sushi accounting for 9%, 7%,3% of the teenagers' fast food market respectively. To sum up, obviously hamburger is the most popular one when it comes to the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

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