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From picture above, evidently, about 70% of people surveyed adopt a positive attitude to high students studying abroad, which is more than people who disagree. When it comes to the reasons that people agree with it, the major reasons are listed as follows. First and most important, students are able to receive better education by studying abroad. Secondly, studying abroad helps students broaden their horizons and improve English language level, thus making them more capable and independent. Contrast to viewpoints above, people view it negative think the culture difference and totally strange living environment are not suitable for children to adjust. Moreover, confronted with grand economic expenditure, it does make the pressure on the family heavier. From my perspective, i think it acceptable for students to study abroad, as long as the family can bear the cost. It's reasonable that parents may be concerned about that facing a new life is challenging for kids to adjust, but it's a valuable challenge too, overcoming all the setbacks must be a great life experience. Suppose students truly couldn't deal with living in a new country, they still could come back home.
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