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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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Drawing conclusions according to what you see or what you hear is truly unreasonable, my dear friends. In our real life, for the reason that we believe what our eyes and ears are telling us, from time to time, we wrongly misunderstand people around us. Nevertheless, the parts of our body may trick us, which is similar to some soap operas, the man and woman break up for seeing or hearing something turn out to be a fake.What a pity! It occurred to me an experience happened to me at the time when i was 8. Accidentally, i bumped into a conversation my mom had with my brother, she told my brother that she didn't give birth to my brother and me. Hearing this, i scared to death and cried out loud. Mom found me and amusingly, she couldn't help laughing. She explained that it was just a joke on my brother. Only then did i stop crying. In sum up, my dear friends, you ought not to judge to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. Not just because it may not be true, but because you should keep a strong faith in people you love!

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