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Nowadays the people who speak English are the most in the world, and it is likely that we will go abroad in the future. Though we are in our hometown in the future, we may meet some foreigners , so learning english well is important for us. If you have difficuties in learning english, here are some advice for you:We must listen to the record carefully and regularly, it is useful to our listening. Speaking more is also a very important step in learning English, we must dare to speak aloud bravely in the public, it can improve our sense of English. To improve our English, writing more is also a must. we can imprve it by keeping diaries,writing aticles and so on. Last but most importantly ,interet is necessary to do evrything. We have to build our confidence in learning English.