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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16922
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;部分句子偏简单,注意有错误的句子;作者词汇表达不够丰富,另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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I maybe will take her who is a foreign friend of mine to visit the TaiMu mountain of my hometown. There are three reasons.The first one is that the TaiMu mountain is the most famous place in my hometown.The mountain not very tall but beatiful.There is different form other mountain.I thought she will like to seeing some differents.The second one is that, these are many tamples in the TaiMu mountain.Although is not too big mountain,but has many tamples was built in here.Sometime,these tamples will hold some activities.It is funny.The last but not least,I konw she is like doing some sports.Climbing mountain is her first one love. I hope she will enjoy the trip of the TaiMu mountain.

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