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I maybe will take her who is a foreign friend of mine to visit the TaiMu mountain of my hometown. There are three reasons.The first one is that the TaiMu mountain is the most famous place in my hometown.The mountain not very tall but beatiful.There is different form other mountain.I thought she will like to seeing some differents.The second one is that, these are many tamples in the TaiMu mountain.Although is not too big mountain,but has many tamples was built in here.Sometime,these tamples will hold some activities.It is funny.The last but not least,I konw she is like doing some sports.Climbing mountain is her first one love. I hope she will enjoy the trip of the TaiMu mountain.