2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I love my parents I think they are greastest in the world ，what s more， they also teach me a lot of thought In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven.In light of this,I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.