2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中词汇表达使用较丰富，部分高级词汇的使用比较灵活，单词拼写方面要继续努力；采用了一些简单的从句。

It is a universilly obvious phenomenon that computer has become on part of our both daily life and work time. it can do so many stuff which our brain can't do ,such as complexied caculation,that it convenience us a lot.Therefor,many people hold that it would occupy our homeland in someday and enslave the whole humanbeing. I really can't be agree with the upon point.first and the foremost,we invent the computer and we are the moving animals,which decide our control.Secondly,humanbeings can handle many enmorgencies.However ,which can't be true for a lot of procedures.Last but not the least,our society is so complexy that no other species can overcome it.What's more,it won't be happen for computers that they can build a effectively rulling world. We need science,but we know how to control bad things happening.Upon things only should be in the fictions which will be interesting probably.