错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;文章词汇表达多样性不够,还要注意词汇拼写;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
It is important for us to have good habits when we study,but how can we have a good habit?Here are some views for you. Firstly,we should prepare lessons before class,many students think that is not important and necessary.In my opinion,it's necessary.If you do like that you may have confidence in the class .Scondly,you must concentrate in the class,and keep notes that you think it's necessary for you.Good heart is not written.Don't keep drifting away!Thirdly,the more do exercise the more you will understand the knowledge.And that you also know what make you misstakes.Therefore,good study habits is important! So we should have good study habits.