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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2282
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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作者词汇表达丰富多彩,但是要留意单词拼写;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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In the contemporary socity, whether government should spend more money on artistic or not sparked spirited debate. It is evidently reasonable for some to believe that if government pay more attention to the development of science and improvement of medical instrusments, people wil lead a better life and feel a sense of satisfication. By contract, some others may claim that art enrich individuals psychological world. As a matter of fact, this issue is a complex and controversial one. Different folks may hold various opinions due to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer answer. In this essay, I will investigate some of the possible reasons for each view. some arguments can be made that government should spend money on social service or science instead of art. By this I mean, social service and science improvement play a vital role in improving individuals' life. For one thing, if medical system runs well, people will live longer than before and not be suffered form disasters. It goes without saying that government spend money on science and medical instrusments can greatly improve people's material life. For example, advanced science plays an importment role in life, these people who emply people to take up online work earn a lot of money. The success of online companies lies on the developement of science. For another, a lot of inventions satisfy people's material demands. Inevitably, on the other hand, there are others who strongly believe that government should invest moeny on art. In the first place, there are a lot of demands in people's psychological world. Art is one of the most important way to express people's emotions and ideology. What is more, the country's prosperous or booming can no nothing without the active art which benefit to the develpoment of economy. By this I mean, the highly civilized society is always accompanied by the prosperity of culture and art. To be more precise, there are a lot of angles in the artistic world, which mutivate peole to think issues form different aspects. Further, art makes a lot of contribution to develop individual's innocent ability. Taking into all this factors into consideration, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that either view is sound to some extend. Government should spend money both on social fundamental infrustration and art.

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