2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中衔接词丰富。

Dear mum(dad): How time is flying.When I grew up,however your is outdating.Healthy is important for everyone.But did you pay attention this problem when you busy? There are some views for you. Firstly,you should by food instead of driving when you go to work.Secondly,it is necessary for you to take exercise in gymnasium,to playing a ball,to swiming,everything is ok if you enjoy.Thirdly,remembering balance your diets.fourthly,you should have 8 hours to sleep at least.Don't sleep too late,and appropriate Life is just like a beautiful boat and love is the wind,and the wind is you,my dear parents.