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West Lake, which is the most beautiful and well-known attracrions in my hometown, has a long history in this area. Many visitors, including home and abroad, won't miss visit it if they come. So I certainly would show my foreign friend this famous site and may him a good time here. When my friend comes here, I plan to ride bike with him around the lake, enjoying the breeze and stillness of the lake. It must leave us a good memory at this time. When we are tired, we can sit down to see people, especially child, play games, which might remind our own childhood. I believe that only when we can stop enjoying the scene surround us can we find the beauty of the life, keeping us a grateful mind to our friends and our life. In the meanwhile, we are able to eat the special local food in my hometown. What we should not miss in a place is what attract people most--the specialists. I am looking forward my foreign friend to visit here soon and then we start to cherish my together time and enjoy the beauty scenery nearby.
