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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化多样；高级词汇偏少，且文中有部分拼写错误。
Dear Jorn: I hear from LiYi that you will visit my hometown rcently, l am so excited that I cann`t prevent a impulsion to tell you the most interesting place in my hometown I will introduce to you when you come here. The first place is desert park which is located in north from my hometown, you may haven`t see such eidolon is seat in green-and-moist city, yes, she is really exist and she`s name is "ku mu ta ge " desert, every year many people invlove forigner come to there in order to feeling the soul of nature. The another place I would show you is named fire mountain, form the name you can imagine the specia of this place, the temperature can reach in 60 degree, that means one egg could be fry and you can eat it in one minut. You must be confused that such hot place how we can go there, the question you needn`t think about it, because the degree that I have told you is the the temperature of the top of the mountain, you can choice the hight form you own condition. That is the most populer place in my hometown, I will bring you to see it, wish you have a good journey in my hometown. see you soon. yours luowenhui March, 19 in 2015
可可英语 - 划词释义
