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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；熟练使用了一些长难句；高级词汇使用贫乏，注意一下个别拼写错误。
Dear Jorn: I hear from LiYi that you will visit my hometown recently, l am so excited that I can not prevent an impulsion to tell you the most interesting place in my hometown that I will introduce to you when you come here. The first place is desert park which is located in north of my hometown, you may have not see such an eidolon is seat in green-and-moist city, yes, she is really existed and hers name is "Ku Mu Ta Ge " desert, every year many people invlove foreigner come to there in order to feel the soul of nature. Another place I would show you is named fire mountain, form the name you can imagine the special of this place, the temperature can reach into 60 degrees, that means one egg could be fryed and you can eat it in one minut. You must be confused such place how we can go there, the question you need not think about it, because the degree that I have told you is the top of the mountain, you can choice the hight by you own condition. That is the most popular place in my hometown, I will bring you to see it, wishing you have a good journey in my hometown. see you soon. yours LuoWenHui March, 19, in 2015
