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Dear Jorn: I hear from LiYi that you will visit my hometown recently, l am so excited that I can not prevent an impulsion to tell you the most interesting place in my hometown that I will introduce to you when you come here. The first place is desert park which is located in the north of my hometown, you may have not saw such an eidolon is seat in green-and-moist city, yes, she is really exist and hers name is "Ku Mu Ta Ge " desert, every year many people involve foreigner come there in order to feel the soul of nature. Another place I would show you was named fire mountain, from the name you can imagine the special of this place, the temperature can reach into 60 degrees, that means one egg could be fried and you can eat it in one minute. You must be confused such a place how we can go there, the question you need not think about it, because the degree that I have told you is the top of the mountain, you can choiced the hight by you own condition. That is the most popular place in my hometown and I will bring you to see it, wishing you have a good journey in my hometown. see you soon. Yours LuoWenHui March, 19, in 2015.
