2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is the most beautiful in fujian province of China.there are much special places where have fresh air and clear water to visit for tourist.Many tourist who have gone there are very like there,because not only can we apecite beautiful scenes ,but also can eat fresh fruit.Only need we pay 10yuan to eat fresh and sweet fruit that is worthy for us.It is important to relax our own mood for us,leading to gain a good mood back to work and live. In a word,the palce is suitabe for foreign friends to visit,also have a good time for them.