2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is the most beautiful in fujian province of China.there are many special places where have fresh air and clear water to visit for tourists.Many tourists who have gone there that are very like there,because not only can we appreciate beautiful scenes ,but also can eat fresh fruit.Only need we pay 10RMB to eat fresh and sweet fruit that is worth for us.It is important to relax our own mood for us,leading to have a good mood back to work and live. In a word,the palce is suitabe for foreign friends to visit,also have a good time for them.