2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

My hometown is the most beautiful in fujian province of China.there are many special places where have fresh air and clear water, They can visit it with their childrend.Many tourists who have gone there liking there,because not only can we appreciate beautiful scenes,but also can eat fresh fruit.Only need we pay 10RMB to eat fresh and sweet fruit that is worth for us.It is important to relax our own mood for us,leading to have a good mood back to work and live. In a word,the place is suitable for foreign friends to visit, also have a good time for them.