2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

My hometown is the most beautiful in fujian province of China.there are many special places where have fresh air and clear water, They can visit it with their children.Many tourists who have gone there liking there,because not onlywe can appreciate beautiful scenes,but also can eat fresh fruit.Only we need pay 10RMB to eat fresh and sweet fruit that is worth for us.It is important to relax our own mood for us,leading to have a good mood back to work and live. In a word,the place is suitable for foreign friends to visit.