高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。

there are many trees around my hometown ,there are many fishes in rive.the house are very simple and streets are very narrow .people work hard and live poor life.now .there are many tall buildings 0n there street ;many cars across the street .factortys developing but the environment come to bad.