Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;熟练使用了一些长难句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
now, the social enconimy is rising. people often use their cell phone to do everything, such as buying,selling, reading,learning etc. people like cell phone cause it is very convenience,cell phone can do everything to save time for people. but it just go worst, people start use cell phone every moment, they don't want to put the cell phone down, even they know overusing the cell phone will do harm to their eyes. it's report that overusing the cell phone will make people neck pain and dizzy. as the picture said, if the people still infatuate with cell phone,they will die in one day and do not know how they die.
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